Tuesday, December 2, 2008
It's almost finished, and I hope you will point out any glaring mistakes or places where things could be tweaked a bit. The color you see isn't the true color as everyone's monitors will be different, and some colors that jump out at you are hardly noticeable in the actual painting. Anyway, please tell me if something is distracting, or the contrasts aren't right, or I need more soft edges. I softened the edges that are furthest away from the viewer, but maybe you don't like that.
I love having a panel of "critiquers"! What would make this painting better? By the way, it's 18" x 24". oil pastel on gesso board.